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teal i just now finished ur story so far and I LOVE IT!!!!! i seriously can't wait to see what's going to happen next, it's keeping me in constant suspense! if you ever stop writing your story i will seriously flip my lid like i've never flipped it before! MELISSA! ur back and i couldn't be happier!!! im so glad your finally feeling better it makes me happy inside! i've been so worried about you but now i know its ok. ^^

#29
In the same fashion they had used to disappear from the hospital room, Doctor Skippy and Derrick appeared in a burst of red fire. Derrick looked around; he didn’t recognize any of his surroundings. They were on a street outside and it was dark. There seemed to be a gloom about the place. They were standing in front of a large, black, iron gate. Doctor Skippy had left Derrick’s side to go over to an intercom—most likely to announce their arrival—and Derrick suspected that this would be the best time to try and run for it. He turned and took off in the opposite direction Doctor Skippy was going. Doctor Skippy looked over his shoulder and saw Derrick running off. He didn’t seem at all bothered by this fact.
“Hold it there boy.” He said calmly as he lifted his hand and swished it in the air. Suddenly, Derrick couldn’t move. He fell onto his back and struggled against his invisible binds on the pavement.
“It’s no use fighting it. You’re not going anywhere.” Doctor Skippy said in a bored tone as he walked over to fetch Derrick. He reached down to grab Derrick by his collar and hoist him up, but Derrick sank his teeth into Doctor Skippy’s hand.
“Aaah!” Doctor Skippy yelled in pain as he jerked his hand away. “You little—!”
“Man, you taste bad!” Derrick said, trying to wipe his mouth on the sleeve of his shirt without much success.
“You do anything like that again and—,”
“What’re you gonna do? Cry?” Derrick made a pouty face.
“No.” Doctor Skippy swung his fist and punched Derrick in the face. “That’s what I’m gonna do.” He said, looking satisfied.

i'll put the rest later kevin's makin me get off....ok here's the rest! Actually i'm just gonna put this little section in here so you get more than one page today.

#29.5
“Ow!” Derrick yelled. He spat blood onto the ground beside him.
“Now you know who’s in charge. You better give me some respect.” Doctor Skippy snarled as he yanked Derrick up by the collar of his shirt. He swished his hand again, and Derrick regained the use of his legs. “Don’t even think about running again.”
Doctor Skippy dragged Derrick over to the intercom by the gate. He pushed the small silver button and spoke into it.
“Congratulations! I’ve got your prize!”
“Just bring him up here, idiot.” A harsh female voice replied. Derrick tried to suppress his laughter. The gates opened and Derrick and Doctor Skippy were free to walk the path up to a large palace.
#30
Doctor Skippy led Derrick through numerous halls and doors and up a couple of staircases. Even if Derrick wanted to run now, he would just end up getting lost trying to find an exit. In every hall the carpet was a deep purple color, as well as on the stair cases. Tons of white candles big and small lit the hallways along with many elegant chandeliers. They soon came to a pair of large silver doors, which Doctor Skippy opened after making sure Derrick would behave himself. A long, narrow purple carpet led up to a brilliant white throne. Upon the throne sat a beautiful woman, rather young looking, in an elegant silver gown. A sparkling silver tiara sat upon her shiny, long dirty blonde hair.
“Wow, you guys really like these three colors don’t you?” Derrick muttered.
“You will not speak unless you’re spoken to!” Doctor Skippy hissed in Derrick’s ear. He then grabbed Derrick by the arm and proceeded down the purple carpet in this fashion. When they approached the woman in the throne, Doctor Skippy bowed. When he noticed Derrick was not following, he flicked his finger and Derrick’s body bowed on its own.
“So, this is Derrick.” The woman said smiling as she gazed down upon the two of them. Her voice was loud, yet gentle.
“Yes, I got him just as you asked me to.” Doctor Skippy said proudly.
“I wouldn’t have had to ask you to if you would have followed your first instructions!” The kindness had left the woman’s voice as she yelled in frustration at Doctor Skippy. He lowered his head in shame.
“Now, today is the eighteenth, yes?” The woman asked one of the guards beside her. He nodded and she then looked back at Derrick and Doctor Skippy.
“Hmm.” The woman lifted herself out of her throne and down the few steps that led to Derrick and Doctor Skippy. She put her hand under Derrick’s chin and lifted his head a bit as she examined him. Derrick would have pushed her arm away if it wasn’t for those dandy inviso-ropes.
“We’ll have to clean him up a bit,” She said, referring to the blood that covered Derrick’s nose and mouth. “But other than that, he’s a lovely young man.”
“Coming from you I take that as an insult.” Derrick moved his head away from the woman’s hand, glaring at her. He didn’t know what, but something about her made him feel uneasy.
“You have no right to talk to me that way. You will respect the queen.” She said sternly.
“The queen of what, dog sh—” Derrick was cut off when the queen slapped him across the face.
“Ow! What is it with you people and hitting me in the face?!” Derrick asked in an irritated tone.
“Don’t make me do it again.” The queen scolded. “Now, guards, I want you to escort him to a holding cell for now. Ernest, I’m done with you. You may go.” She then turned and walked down the purple carpet and out the silver doors, her gown swishing behind her.
Derrick turned to Doctor Skippy. “Ernest?!”
“It’s a name. You got a problem?”
“You’re some evil wizardy thing and your name is Ernest?” Derrick laughed. Doctor Skippy turned and punched Derrick in the face again.
#31
“Dude!” Derrick yelled. Doctor Skippy turned on his heel and stormed down the carpet. The two guards from the side of the queen’s throne came forward and escorted Derrick to his ever-so-fun holding cell.

for a little bit now, my story's gonna be switching back and forth between harrold and derrick so i thought it'd be less confusing if i just put the whole "derrick" section in rather than just a page of it. the next entry will be a "harrold" section and i'll just do that for a couple pages. hopefully it makes it less confusing rather than more confusing.

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