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A Vampire's Love
Prologue and Chapter One
Prologue
"Hey. Wait up!" I call to my best friend Kai. My name is Kayuki Sou. I'm eighteen years old, and this is the story of how I fell in love with a Vampire.
Chapter One : A Vampire's Love
"Hey Kayuki! What's up?" Says Kai giving me a giant hug. "Not much. You?" "I'm just hanging out with my cousin. He's visiting for a while and then he's going to live with me for atleast two or three years." "What's your cousin's name?" I ask in curosity. "Oh. His name is Alexander. He's somewhere around here." "Ok. Well, see you later Kai." "See ya Kayuki!" I walk down a path in a forest. I sense a presense somewhere near me. I quickly turn around. "H...Hello? Who's there?" I look around everywhere. Then, that's when I first saw him. A tall figure leaning against a tree in a black cloak. His brown spiky hair sticking out in all directons. His eyes open, green eyes staring at me. The thing I knew, was that I should run. But I couldn't. I was staring into the eyes of a total stranger. What I didn't know was that I was staring into the eyes of a Vampire.
- by sakura_1258 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/26/2008 |
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- Title: A Vampire's Love
- Artist: sakura_1258
- Description: My Vampire story. : A Vampire's Love.
- Date: 10/26/2008
- Tags: vampires love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Chuuddee - 10/26/2008
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o0o0o0o... Vampire's love..
this story is the same as the bestselling book today, Twilight with its new upcoming movie..
well, its nice.. - Report As Spam
- Sutaa Yagami - 10/26/2008
- I think you shouldn't use such a simple beginning. More complicated or interesting to really hook the reader wink
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- xXxSoMeOnEs_A-n-G-e-LxXx - 10/26/2008
- I like that this goes right on to the second chapter its so amazing for everyone that enjoys this book as much as I do you need to make a 3rd chapter I give you a rating of 5 thats all they let us do and I gave the second chapter 5
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