The Demon Children (Continued)

• Artist: Xx-iShadowCat-xX
• Description: Alexadner and Michelle are two demon children. Two months ago there parents split up and now their mom is dating this new guy.The atuomaticly hate him mostly because his human.Later on they learn to accept him.
• Date: 08/18/2008
• Tags: love demons human family

As dinner went on,Alexadner and Michelle were secretly plotting a way to get rid of Reggie.He's so stupid trying to get in a family of demons,Alexander smirked. Michelle looked over at her brother and saw his smirked.She knew he had a plot ready."Mother can Alexander and I be excused"she asked softly. Her mother nodded and they went back up to thier room."So whats the plan brother"she asked locking the door behind them."We kill him by getting him into a car accident"he answered. Michelle agreed and went to play with moon."Hey Brother you should show him your snake."Michelle giggled.Alexander went under his bed and pulled out his 7 foot snake.The snake only liked Alexadner,Michelle,Moon,and their parents.

They went back down stairs."Hey Reggie wanna see my pet snake"Alexadner asked pushing the snake in his face."uhhh...sure"he said nervously. The snake coiled around him and he didn't make any sudden movements."Ok you can take it back"he whimpered.Alexadner chuckled,"Whats the matter?You scared?".Alexander took his snake back.Reggie took a coupole of deep breaths."No...its just I get nervous and stuff"he said looking down. Vanessa saw what they were doing."Ok you two go back to your room"she said.They did what she said and pretend to go to sleep.When Reggie went was on the road it was dark and foggy. He was just driving in his convertible.He was very tired and didn't feel like driving.He saw two figures.They looked like Alexander and Michelle but he wasn't sure.He rubbed his and looked close. When he got closer a truck came out of no where and headed straight for him.His car got out of control and he flipped over. He was taken to the hospital,reggie survivied the crash and just broke a couple bones.

When Alexander and Michelle heard he survived they knew it was time to step it up.They were going to kill him and made sure he wouldn't have a chance survive.

Comments

[Pasty DeVrays]

This is fiction.
It needs to be in the right category.

[kittypuss123]

sweet liked it alot...

[Xx-iShadowCat-xX]

Thanks for the tips but you don't know what i've been taught so I might not know what you know.

[viridescent muse]

Sorry, but I'm going to have to give this a score of zero. You need to employ the basics of grammar, spelling and proper word usage, not to mention paragraphs and spacing, and then perhaps this story will be worth a read. Some exposition would also be nice.

Note: You do need to keep writing. Improvement only comes through practice, critique, practice, and more critique.