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~One full night, I heard a sound, The sound flapping wings.
I looked and saw a small, golden butterfly flying in the night.
I asked myself, "What is a butterfly doing in the middle of the night?"
It would seem that it was searching for something, or someone.
It was flying, round and round, like a puppy chaseing it's tail.
It looked at me, I looked at the butterfly.
Then for some reason, I was able to see it's face.
The golden butterfly had a glow on it's face! I walked up closer, close enough, I saw a watery tear!
I then asked it,"What is a beautiful butterlfly like you doing in the middle of the night, crying?"
Of course a butterfly can't speak but I felt a bond with it.
It replied, "Im here because I wanted to save you."
"Wow it talks" i said to myself.
I was confused about what it meant, so i asked it a very simple question,
"What are you going to save me from?"
The butterfly just smiled back with a sad expression...
I asked the butterfly,
"Why are you sad?"
But why is it crying i asked myself?
The butterfly, flying around the night skies Lets out a twee, With sparkleing gliters in the skies, Flew in and landed on my heart.
I can feel my heart calming down.
What was happening to me? then suddenly, I heard its voice again.
"Have you ever felt love before? You don't need to tell me, but I'd like to know."
"Yes, indeed I have, why u ask me this question?"
"Because..."~
- by Naoto Amagi Hanamaru |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/21/2008 |
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- Title: "Butterfly" The beginning
- Artist: Naoto Amagi Hanamaru
- Description: This is the novel i have been writting for a while, a fusion of Butterfies and Arcana, well arcana comes in later. This is also a love story. This is the beginning of the story and I really hope u enjoy the first chapter of the story, feel free to comment me. If u don't like, I'm sorry that my love story sucks DX
- Date: 12/21/2008
- Tags: butterfly chapter
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Comments (7 Comments)
- J d Spazz - 06/20/2009
- To be completely honest, I don't exactly get it. :/ And there are a few grammar mistakes. *is a grammar FREAK* But the end is kinda good. Kinda leaves you hanging wondering why. 3/5
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- Naoto Amagi Hanamaru - 12/23/2008
- Molly... -_-
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- Suirsqushidush - 12/21/2008
- awkward... but interesting. i'm mainly posting this for gold biggrin
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- RainHidesTears - 12/21/2008
- wow thats awosome=O 5/5 and then 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000=O
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- Naoto Amagi Hanamaru - 12/21/2008
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XD I love you to Ghost Tomboy
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- Nanako Hanamaru - 12/21/2008
- I love it! And no it does not suck, it is so awesome. I'm wondering if that butterfly is me. Anyways, I love it!
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- Naoto Amagi Hanamaru - 12/21/2008
- There is a reason why the main Character has no name...
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