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"After we take here... we should move the 1st Armoured Division here, to choke enemy reinforcements." The commander said, moving his fingers along a map.
"But then wha--" Gen. Jack Harvey said, getting cut off from a light rumble.
"What's that?!" The commander called out, looking at me.
"Sargent, get your squad together and go check the area." He commanded me, I nod.
I get up, picking up my rifle as I do. Walking out of the cold, dimly lit concrete room. "Harvey, Daley, Sampson; on your feet." I commanded, beckoning my men to me.
"What is it Sarge?" They whine, Private Harvey, a buff man, about 27, with black and blond hair down to the back of his neck, dark brown eyes, and tanned skin; Private Sampson, A skinny guy, real young too, only 21, bright blond stubs for hair, a slight beard, like most young men I see around, bright blue eyes, not someone who seems likely to make it in this war; and Corporal Daley, Orange-Red hair, covering his forehead, a slight build, hazel eyes, he's been in my squad for a long while now; and myself, Sargent Burton, dark brown, almost black hair that covers one of my eyes, but the back doesn't go down too far, a little more than average build, dark brown eyes, rectangular glasses, I've been with the Rebellion since it started; joined with my best friend, and now Cpl.
"Where we going Sarge?" Cpl asks me, walking right by me.
"We're going to secure the area." I reply, gripping the icy handle a of a steel door.
"Ready your weapons." I say, lifting my rifle to my shoulder in my other hand. I pull the door open, Harvey and Sampson immediately walk out.
"Clear" They call, quietly. Cpl then myself walk out, rifles ready. I close the door behind me.
"Proceed to the left." I command, my rifle to my shoulder as i walk through the snow; it covers half of my shin. The ground shakes once again, this time violently.
"Eyes open." I call out.
"Movement spotted! 3 o'clock!" Sampson calls, I look to the area, and open fire. They do the same, just after me. I see the object drop.
"Move up, lets see what we shot." I say, waving forward. I track through the snow, looking left from right.
"Careful, it's an open plan." Daley points out, staying low. I nod, waving forward again; faster. I start jogging slightly. I hear them close behind me. We arrive at the tree-line where the object was spotted.
"Fan out, and search for it." I command, waving my hand from left to right. I walk into the tree line, the snow dying down in here.
"I found it!" Harvey calls out, I run over, crushing twigs, and stumbling over roots while i do.
"Yupp, it was an enemy..." I hear Daley say, as I arrive at the body.
"Okay guys, eyes open, and stay low. Sampson, so alert the Commander of this." I say, aiming around.
"Roger." He replies, running off.
"Daley, try to find some foot prints." I command, beckoning Harvey to stay close to me. I walk into the forest more, the light dimming more and more; the trees bigger and closer together.
"Harvey, stay close, and be sure to check side to side." I command, looking around myself still.
"Yes sir." He replies.
"I FOUND SOME!" I hear Daley call out. I turn around, and Harvey's already started back. I jog back, still looking around cautiously. I get back a little after Harvey; Daley pointing to the ground at a trail of footprints.
"Good job." I say to him. Sampson comes back into the forest, out of breath.
"What's wrong?" Harvey asks him, he then falls to the ground; his body makes a hard thump when he does. A large puddle of blood encircles him already.
"Get down!" I command, leaning against a tree. The sound of treads and wheels appears, not too far away; growing louder.
"They're gonna follow his foo--" I say, and stop, hearing the breaking of twigs. I look at the other two, Daley's on the ground, and Harvey's laying by a small bunch of fallen branches. The sounds of the wheels and treads crushing the snow continues to get louder. I peek around the tree and there's a squad of about 10 people; about 10 ft from me. I press my back against the tree, looking at Daley. He shrugs, looking around, I then point around me, behind the tree. He peeks up a bit, then immediately gets down; his face pale. I peek around the tree, seeing that they are only a few feet from us. I go back, breathing heavily. I look at Harvey, and he's peeking through the bunch of branches.
"YOU KILLED MY BEST FRIEND!" He screams out, getting up a little and opening fire. The sounds and flashes of his barrel loud & bright. Immediately there's return fire, and he falls back. "K-kill... the--." He says quietly, holds all over his body. The fire doesn't stop. The sound of wood ripping all over from the bullets. Daley looks at me, freaked out. I look down, and see blood gushing out of my side.
"Shitt--..." I say, falling to the ground, my sight slowly going dark. I see Daley lay by me, and put blood all over him. I nod, laying still and dead-like. More gun fire starts, my vision going darker and darker.
"REINFORCEMENTS HAVE ARRIVED!" I hear a familiar voice call out.
"GET A MEDIC OVER HERE!" Daley, yelling. My vision black now, my hearing failing me as well as my sense of touch.
"You'll be o.. ka--..." I hear a faint voice, then my body lift off the ground.
[Phase 1.. End.]
- by Taras Treat |
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- | Submitted on 01/24/2009 |
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- Title: The Rebellion Phase 1
- Artist: Taras Treat
- Description: After a devastating war against a new world threat, the Federation of World Peace has fallen to the armies of New World Order. FWP had fought their best, preventing NWO from landing on the shores of the last remaining continents; Northern & Southern America. But, they failed... 3 years into the dictatorship of the world and a rebellion has risen, World Liberation Force. All around the world small camps of the WLF have started... the main base located in the frigged, and icy northern Canada...
- Date: 01/24/2009
- Tags: rebellion fighting
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Fish32 - 08/04/2009
- Your an OK writer, I'm not trying to offend you but i wrote like that when I was like, 9. but I still use a lot of commas.
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- The-Ginger-Snap - 01/25/2009
- Wow Kyle this is really good, lol Daley, Sampson, Harvey... sounds like people i know >.> <.<
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- Taras Treat - 01/24/2009
- first comment, I stoled it for myself. xD
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