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"May fall asleep already."
" I've tried , but can't."
May lays her head apon the pillow and fells to sleep. She driftes a way into a nightmare.
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She is suddenly surrounded by darkness. She doesn't know where she is. She silently craws to a corner and weeps heavly. She hears something in the distance, it frightens her. A dark image appears out of the shawdows and runs toward her. She jumps to her feet and runs away. It's so dark it feels like she is going nowhere as the dark shawdow creeps closer and closer. She is trapped. She trys to scream but all she hears is the scary footsteps lurking toward her. She runs faster and harder but is going nowhere. She stops to face the shawdow as it leaps toward her. She can't see a thing as if she were blind. She keeps trying to wake up but it seems she is trapped in this nightmare. She weeps more and more. She can't run away as the dark shawdow grabs her and shakes her violently. She can't breathe anymore, the air around her is now vanishing. She feels as this has been going on for hours. The shawdow drops her to the ground as she gasps for air. She runs away but falls. Then she sees a light. She quickly runs toward it. She looks back and the shawdow is gone. She gets to the light. Out of nowhere the shawdow leaps on her as she screams for help. She is trapped in this nightmare. She pushs and punches and finally she is free. She runs into the light. She is now free. She is out of thew nightmare.
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She wakes up to she her mother looking at her. She grabs her mother and hugs her tightly while crying.
"May what's wrong?"
"Mommy!"
"It was only a nightmare, May."
"No, mommy it's real, and we are in it!!"
The End!!!

- Title: Nightmare
- Artist: Josliynn
- Description: A little girl falls into a nightmare and is trapped. But when she thinks she's awake, she realizes, her and her mother are trapped inside forever.
- Date: 06/27/2009
- Tags: nightmare
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Josliynn - 08/20/2009
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I wasn't trying to be scary and thankx for saying it was good but I wasn't trying to make it scary kk thankx for commenting bye
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- HannaDanielle - 08/18/2009
- um...not being mean but that isnt scary it wus good and all but it wusnt really scary try being more creative wit the scaryness dont let her wake up till idk just make sumtin more scary smile
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- Josliynn - 07/10/2009
- I know I missspelled some words I know srry k thankx for the comment.
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- Quira13 - 07/04/2009
- wow that was awsome but at some points it didnt make since like when u said that may was trapped and then she starts runi agin if she's trapped theres noway of her getting out and i know this because i write horror fiction stories for aliving and im really good i always get A's on my papers but other then the confusing parts that was awsome and you should really do more stories but u must reread them or else u'll do poorly
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- Josliynn - 06/29/2009
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Thanks srry I was in a hurry I tried not to but thanks
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- Girly-card13 - 06/29/2009
- U may want to try using different words besides she, and also alot of ur words are spelled wrong. All in all I like it ok.
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- Josliynn - 06/27/2009
- I know I spelled Shadow wrong srry!
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