- "Tell me! Why, why do you make me do these things!?" I exclaimed. He replied back in a muffled tone since he was the one in control at the time. "Listen if you weren't so weak I wouldn't have to take over like that, not only that but that poor innocent woman would still be alive, oh so sad." I could hear the sarcasm in his tome. "Mark my words I will find a way to get rid of you I swear it." "Well before that oh threating one, you take over I'm tired. With that final word my eye sight was back. From what I could tell we were nowhere near the bank, or a city of any kind. "Where are we? What did you do?" His voice turned back into an inner wispier coming from the back of my mind. "Same thing you would be able to do if you were not such a loser." I don't know why but he enjoys to mock and try to humiliate me. I glance around at my surrounding, it didn't take me long to realize he had brought us to Rivendale lake, about an hours drive from the city where we attempted are amazing bank heist. "How the hell did you get us from Craneveiw all the way to Rivendale lake?" There was silence, he did not respond. "Hello, no snappy comeback?" "Hey there, I'm lost. Might a strong man like yourself help me find my way home?" It was a woman, I looked around and there leaning against a tree was the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. She had long blond hair stretching down her back, blue eyes, and wearing a long red dress. In the back of my mind I knew this was so fake, what is a woman doing in the forest wearing such a nice dress? It was hard for the words to escape my mouth. She took a step towards me. I stood there dumbfounded. "Whats the matter?" At that moment I jerked up and stood up straight, brushed off my black T-shirt, and stared right at her. "Ma'am I would be honored." "Glad to here it." She responded, her tone changed the innocence was no longer there. I stared up at her again. "Ma'am?" WHAM! As my head rose to see her, her fist met my face. I stumbled back, she had a mean right hook. I rubbed my nose where she had hit me. "Ow! What was that for!?" I said getting back to my feet. "Your the one that attacked the bank, the one that killed that girl?" All I thought was, how did she know I was here? "Listen I can explain." I uttered softly taking a step towards her. Then from the back of my mind. "No! You freaken idiot!" Then I felt a sharp pain rise up from my stomach, she was not alone. There was another boy with her. All I saw was black hair and glasses before I blacked out. The thought that kept racing through my head was, where did he come from, and how did I not see him, and again, how did they know where I was!?
- by Withered Ace |
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- | Submitted on 07/08/2009 |
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- Title: Voices Ch1 Part 2
- Artist: Withered Ace
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This is the second part of the first chapter of Voices.
Again please let me know what you think. - Date: 07/08/2009
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- Withered Ace - 07/25/2009
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Thank you
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- amybrown93 - 07/16/2009
- this is actually really good. I would like to hear more!
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