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The man with red eyes was staring at me, like a lion seeking its pray. I looked at him Puzzled. What did he want from me? I glanced at his eyes to see a dark maroon color with glistening Silver. My eyes widened i knew the answer to my question. My blood. I ran across the hall of the hospital screaming, But i was to slow the man appeared infront of me, and threw me against a wall. I cried in pain i think he broke my hand. I squirmed to get away, he took me by my throat and whispered in my ear "Hope you taste as good as you look." I was'nt gonna die like this, I used all my strength and kicked him in his sensitive spot. He moaned and fell to the ground. I knew this was a dream because of the odd thing that happened next. I ran for the door and found a huge golden staircase. I looked over it and saw a fire pit with screaming and pain echoing like a blow horn. I stood still for a moment to realize a shock coming from chest. I fell to the ground holding my chest. I heard the voice of Alex screaming "LESLEY NO HOLD ON!" I felt the ground underneath me cracking. I looked at it. No! i don't wanna go to hell! what did i do wrong? I raced for the staircase but the flooring cracked and i fell. I flailed my arms hoping to find something to grab onto. A spike appeared above me and i screamed with a mixture of crying. I didn't feel myself hit the lava. Instead i appeared on a hospital bed and a voice said "I'm very sorry but there was nothing more we could do." How long have i been dead? I pushed off the blanket to see Alex looking at me amazed. I hopped up and ran to him hugging him with all my might. He kissed me softly and passionately. I groaned he looked up "Did i hurt you darling?" he asked
"No it felt good" I said
- by xx emo lesley xx |
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- | Submitted on 11/06/2009 |
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- Title: First bite Part 4 Slipping
- Artist: xx emo lesley xx
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My 4th part of my Novel im writing part 3 is out but not on this account
To read it Then look up Uber loge6520 on the submissions by user tab and click the Thread
Anyway i was hacked when i wrote that but i got my account back so im back! - Date: 11/06/2009
- Tags: first bite part slipping afterlife
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Comments (2 Comments)
- xx emo lesley xx - 11/09/2009
- no there isnt
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- Akaena - 11/09/2009
- um...sorry to say...but there's two spelling errors in your writing...4/5
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