- *Clank* *Clank* *Clank* Lily was walking to the bus stop she walked to every day. Today was like any other except she felt like someone was following her...Arriving at the bus stop she looked around to make certain that her stalker wasn't following her. She thought she heard a little whisper...She wasn't sure what it was saying but she could have sworn something whispered near her ear...She assumed it was nothing and continued her thoughts...The hairs on the back of her neck begin to stand up...She looked over...There was something this time! she knew it!...But where was it coming from? She looked around but she couldn't see a thing...~Ughhh.....~ Shocked she flinched and dropped her cigarette, she looked to her right and saw...Some weird blob...I looked kinda like a marshmallow...Uhh....She stared at the ghost like creature in amazement and shock, and weirdly enough, the little figure's big black eyes stared back at her...Her bus had arrived, "Oh no" she thought...Not knowing what to do she got onto the bus and headed for school...Taking those steps onto the bus she wonders if anyone else can see the blob like figure...She tensely takes an empty seat near the front of the bus. The bus is more quiet then usual...Lily pays no regard to the odd lack of noise and diverts her attention to looking at the blob. She examines it throughly, it was pure white, had a set of square black eyes and when it opened it mouth it seemed to only make "Ughhhh...." noises. Intrigued she attempted to poke the strange creature. It made an odd "Fwump" noise when she poked it's stomach, waiting for something to happen she had her eyes focused...The little creature made a giggling noise and had sort of a grin on it's face...She smiled and attempted to ask it a simple and direct questions like "What are you?", "Who are you", "Why did you follow me?", and "Do you have a name?"...No response. "Hmph", discouraged she slumped back into the seat of the bus. People kept coming on and getting off, nothing special, but what seemed extremely odd was that nobody could see the little white creature...Finally she reached the school...She walked off the bus, and through the entrance doors...Now the difficult part begins...
- Title: An odd fall day
- Artist: Tauturus
- Description: This is the story for an avi art entry that I decided to submit. Please inform me if I should continue the storyline. (;
- Date: 01/09/2011
- Tags: fall
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- Risumsato Ryu - 01/11/2011
- I thought your story was interesting and unique compared to the other's so 5/5.
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