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As she tip-toed down the hall, eyes wide, heart pounding. Gripping her teddy bear as if she would never let go of it. She walked slowly toward the ruffling sound in the living room. It couldn't be mom or dad, they are asleep, she thought. Suddenly the rufling noise stopped. She stopped dead in her tracks, she was as still as a statue. Her heart started pounding faster. Nothing moved, no noise came from the living room. Slowly she started creeping towards the living room. When she creeped into the room, she saw nothing. There came a noise behind her, she turned around and saw a little girl in a white dress. She screamed as loud as she could.
She woke up, mom and dad standing at her bed. "Hannah, it's alright, it was just a bad dream", her mom said. She laid there for a minute, "it seemed so real though", she said.
- by The Moon in the darkness |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/18/2008 |
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- Title: The Dream
- Artist: The Moon in the darkness
- Description: I wrote this in English class. It's not very good but i want to see what people think
- Date: 12/18/2008
- Tags: dream
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Comments (4 Comments)
- snuggley_bear56- - 01/08/2010
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
i screamed when i saw the little girl part...lol it was good. - Report As Spam
- Lilith Celestine17 - 06/30/2009
- Wow! That was spooky. Did you actually see this dream? Where did you get the idea to write this?
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- Samdaninjavampire - 12/24/2008
- o wow 5/5
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- Heart Pandemic - 12/19/2008
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hmmmm.
interesting.
varry up the 'she' a little bit - Report As Spam