Bloody Kiss~

• Artist: II-CyanCrayons-II
• Description: "Its Midnight In an ally way, very classic brother " The deep voice was just around the corner. I wanted to look but I was terrified of that voice from my nightmare, I kept telling myself (run away your a coward unlike your sister)
  I started to cry, the voice sounded different now, much closer to me, I tryed to stay calm, the voice was right beside my ear, it was a boy approxomatly 16-18 years old. "My mind was rolling a flashback in my mind, It kept repeating
  (your a coward run away)
• Date: 03/17/2009
• Tags: bloody kiss vampire

I slightly turned my head to the sound of him. " W who are you...and what are you?" I was trembling in fear, but I had a feeling that i was safe around him. "My name is Riley, and that is all I can tell you, for now princess"
I was about to shoot out my question, ( what do you mean princess?! )
But i blacked out before i could even blink.

Comments

[In Search of that Booty]

It could use some work. For instance, a lot more description.

[emore_vicky]

write the rest of it...please :3

[MusicalMisfit]

are u going to write more, its a good forsadow but i would like to see the rest. PLAESE!!!

[akiradawn]

Intersting, very intersting.

[f l a t u l e n c i a]

this story sounds pretty intersting XD

[Blue light_Namine]

man, thats nice... but its a little bet cold to say, but i like it 3nodding

[II-CyanCrayons-II]

please read discription first so it will make more sense.