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Do you like me?
No, I don' t know you
If I was crying would you care?
No, your just a stranger
Can you help me?
No
Do you know my name?
No, you never told me
I've been gone, did you miss me?
No, it was peaceful without you
Do you even remember me?
No
Once you said you loved me, do you?
No, who are you?
You used to love me
No, I didn't
Do you know about my disease?
No, I don't know anything about you
I'll be gone forever, do you care?
No, just go away
Its time for me to go, need anything?
No, get out of my house
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Your times up, are you ready?
Yes, I really want to die
Did your mother remember you?
No, but i tried
- Title: No, but i tried
- Artist: Loanien
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Description:
In the poem the mother (second line) has been in an accident that caused her to lose her memory. The other person in this is a daughter (first line) who has a disease that will take her life at the end. reads like this---> (daughter talking)
(mother answers)
at the end where the line divides its the girls doctor saying times up.
ask me if you dont get it. - Date: 07/07/2009
- Tags: tried
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Silberfratze - 01/09/2010
- Great to read; sad to imagine sad
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- iiGummi_Bears - 07/07/2009
- thats great. the story is sad though. whats the disease?
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