• "dad can we het a dog?" Asked Naomi. "NO THATS THE 20TH TIME U ASKED NO NO NO" yelled the man. Naomi sat there crying crying . After her dad went to work Naomi had an idea.
    Naomi ran quickly to her room and checked her piggy bank. "Hmm... $8..." she said. " i have to think of a way to get money without my dad catching me." she got dressed got her shoes on got her giutar and walked to the mall. its only across the street. she had to be extra careful. her dad works at the mall. she got scared when her dad came walking toward her. she ran into a store and hid behind a plant. after when her farther left she went back luckliy she didnt got caught. Naomis dad works as a cop at the mall. (Like in mall cop) she got off her hat and put it on the floor and began singing while playing the guitar. "i never gone with the wind..........u make me crazier cra............" she sang. after she was done she looked in her hat biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin she couldnt belvie it biggrin 107 dollers! she ran to the pet store and bought 2 puppys for $50 bucks each. " YAY YAY A PUPPY A PUPPY" she said. soon her farther recanized that voice "Naomi?" he said he looked around. surprised eek "omg AHH" she yelled. she ran around the store going toward the exit "hey look a penny." she said she ran out and ran home. phew! she almost got caught! after she looked at the dogs "hmm ill call u Sad and Glad" she said (them>Sad evil Glad twisted ) rofl she was glad after 6 hours she wonderd why her dad didnt come home yet. she checked the news. "there was a man in the mall who got shoot............... his name is John Mcangole" she news Girl said. O.O cry emo crying crying crying crying it was her dad who died D: xp she wished it havent happened. her babysitter came in the room WHERE WERE U YOUNG LADY? she thought instead she ran up to her and hugged her " im sorry for what happened. i guess u have to live in with me Naomi Mcangole." said the babysitter. Naomi was Bursting into tears. " ITS MY FAULT ITS ALL MY FAULT crying I WAS IN THE MALL WITH MY GUITAR AND SANG AND THEN I TOLD THIS GUY AT THE GUN PLACE TO MAKE SURE U KEEP AND EYE ON HIM BUT I THINK HE SHOOT HIM!!! crying crying crying "


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    Ps. a true story by Jennifer it happend naomi was her friend