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This boy is sick of crying.
This boy is tired of trying.
He may be smiling,
But inside he's dying.
He's rotting away to ashes.
This curse is burning his heart.
He has his own disguise.
He runs and hides in this costume from all the hazards that come near.
He has his own mask.
No one can see through it,
For no one can cure this curse.
He is a smart boy with a fast mind,
But also has a cracked heart.
A heart that cannot contain this kind of pain.
A heart that doesn't want to continue mourning in this agony.
A heart that doesn't want to burn in this acid hurting anymore.
This boy doesn't want people to see this wretched curse.
The only way he survives is with the help of a blade.
It is gleaming and shining,
With his heart's blood dripping on it.
His mask is fading.
This boy is revealed.
But it's too late to save him...
The curse has completed it's task....
- Title: A Curse For A Heart
- Artist: undoings
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Description:
i get these kinda poems popping into my head when i listen to miserable at best by mayday parade....
kinda creepy.... - Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: curse heart
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Two-bit FoxTrot - 12/06/2008
- so sad.....
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- TercesX - 12/06/2008
- ^^ I liked it. It reminds me too much of my boyfriend and a couple of my friends. The poem is sad, but it gets a message across. It started off nice, and rhythmicly (Spell check?), but lost it's rhymes. Stayed good though. 5/5
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- Blaesse - 12/06/2008
- I think you just caught every thought that went through my head for the past week, but actually managed to manifest it in a way I could not. btw I love Mayday Parade
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- DarkWolfRawr - 12/06/2008
- love it
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- Golden Sarah-Belle - 12/06/2008
- i LOVE mayday parade! but this poem is to emo for me. 2/5
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- spikes little princess - 12/06/2008
- it makes you want to keep on reading an makes you think what could the curse be. it let the reader give it is own thought on what it could be
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- Alibis of the Heart - 12/05/2008
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I liked the poem. You used a little bit of paralellism in here, and even some alliteration! Very well done.
If you don't mind, would you take the time to read some of my stuff, thanks. smile - Report As Spam