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Do you taste my Raindrops,
My Child,
My Darling?
Your joyful lips pursing to purge
Your human SIN;
They are Sweeten to Perfection
Of the Purest Salt.
Do you hear my Raindrops,
‘May Child’,
My Dearest?
Your delightful ears straining to hear
Your CONFESSION;
They Thunder upon the Ground
As Delicate Crystals.
Do you see my Raindrops,
My Child,
My Lovely?
Your sparkled eyes shining
Your ENLIGHTMENT;
They Pour from the Heavens
To Shower the Earth.
Do you feel my Raindrops,
‘Mai Childe’,
My Sweetheart?
Your hands itching to hold
Your greatest MIGHT;
They Caress you Coldly
Like a Lover's Arms.
- by Menardi Grace |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/24/2009 |
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- Title: My Raindrops
- Artist: Menardi Grace
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Description:
2/24/09. Made for recreational use. I weaved three layers in this poem: Nature, Human, and Spiritual. Caps, Capitals, Lines, Phrases, etc. are important to notice. I hope this delights you in the sense that it gives various views & angles of the given situation.
Edited in 6/19/09 to correct certain captials. - Date: 02/24/2009
- Tags: raindrops newage hiddenmeanings hidden meaning
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Comments (2 Comments)
- The God Bot 4000 - 03/02/2009
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Beautiful. I enjoy reading poetry of those who actually know what they're doing.
5/5, for sure.
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- CrowleysGirl - 02/25/2009
- wow that was ah-mazing!!!!!
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