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Lying underneath the window
the moon illuminates
a tiny figure
hear her cry
"Father
Protect him
Father
do not forsake him"
watching her fall asleep
a dark shadow emerges
he towers over her
gently touching her face
"My darling
safely be
My darling
do not fret for me"
- by Lady V9lt Dark |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/05/2009 |
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- Title: Prayer for my lover
- Artist: Lady V9lt Dark
- Description: I wrote this poem when I was quite worried about my lover.
- Date: 04/05/2009
- Tags: prayer lover father shadow
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Comments (5 Comments)
- XxKitty_of_DeathxX - 01/06/2010
- omgosh i love it i completley undesrtand i know exactly how you feel
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- MystiqueMelodies - 04/06/2009
- I love it, it's beautiful! And don't worry, at least I understand it. 5/5!
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- Llywelyn Fawr - 04/05/2009
- I can describe this poem in one word: huh? What is going on here? If your going to post something, make sure the reader can understand it. On the positive, Good use of capitalization, but I would also add some periods at the end of each line in the 2nd and 3rd stanza even though you don't need them. It makes it sound a little more sinister.
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- kisadbzlover - 04/05/2009
- this is great!and first comment!
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