How Much I Hurt

• Artist: Ninja4Panda
• Description: This is how i felt though out the whole day today....(warning: this poem is really sad! it might also have bad spelling in it too!)
• Date: 08/22/2009
• Tags: much hurt

~Please stop the yelling~
~Please stop the blaming~
~Please stop the hurting~

~Try to understand~
~Try to realize~
~Try to see it clearly~

~How much you make me suffer~
~How much you dont understand~
~How much you dont see me~

~For who I really am~
~For always ignoring me~
~For always locking me out~

~Just stop this pain already~
~Just let me go please~
~Just leave me alone to die~

~Please forget about me~
~Please erase all trace of my existance~
~Please continue to live~

~A life without me in it~
~A life that you have ruined gone~
~A life that will be gone~

~I will dissapper now~
~I will die right here and now~
~I want to say good bye now~

~So good bye~
~So long~
~And take care~

Comments

[ProfessorKC]

<sigh> so much emotion but imagery is a poet's paint and this one is a blank canvas ... sorry.

Paint us a picture without just telling how you feel. Draw with your words what your sadness is like. It will help you in the long run as a writer.

[Sid-Omniscient]

xP I liked it