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As me and my little sister were crawling into bed grandmother came in to tell us a story. " Now children" she would say " this is the only time I'm gonna tell you about the... Gypsy girl. I suppose you would like to know what she looks like well first" she began " She has beautiful long black hair, and deep deep blue eyes like the ocean at night. she looks like a genie. " wait grandmother?" I asked "Do we have to get into those details can't we just skip into the story?" grandmother looked at me a bit irritated " very well" she said well first.... The gypsy girl was walking down the sanded road when she saw her mother being forsed into a car. " Mother!" the gypsy girl cried. She ran as fast as she could toward her mother. Herr mother looked at her worried. " what is going on!?!?" the gypsy girl asked "well" her mother started "the police caught me stealing apiece of bread for your dinner" her mother began to cry the gypsy girl quickly looked up as a white man walked toward her. hands up!" the white man said. "your mother is going to rot in jail till the rats eat her, she will never see the light of day again!" the white man began stepping closer and closer and closer to the gypsy girl. " Now! I can kill her now or she can rot do you want her to rot!?!?!" the gypsy girl caught a quick glimse of the white mans shot gun. " No i dont want her to rot!' the man smiled. " very well then" *BANG* *BANG *the white man laughed the gypsy girl and her mother were both on the ground dead.
- by ImNaTiVeDeAlwItHiT |
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- | Submitted on 09/06/2008 |
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- Title: The gypsy girl
- Artist: ImNaTiVeDeAlwItHiT
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- Date: 09/06/2008
- Tags: gypsy girl
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Comments (7 Comments)
- -I Cptn J Sparrow I- - 07/02/2009
- Why did the Gypsy girl get shot?
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- Pandas Go Meow - 03/31/2009
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Uuh... well, the story is rushed. Like VERY rushed.
And you should have at least used correct paragraph, sentence, and plot structure.
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- mysticrydder - 03/11/2009
- that was sad! and the way you wrote was rushed.
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- Steves Box - 09/07/2008
- interesting... a bit creepy, but some good literature. 4/5 biggrin nicely done.
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- Catti Brie96 - 09/07/2008
- Thats really sad....i wanna cry now...great job tho...
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- Astomiko - 09/06/2008
- Wow, that is kind of scary! The poor gypsy girl and her mother!
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- ImNaTiVeDeAlwItHiT - 09/06/2008
- well my avi is supposed to look like the gypsy girl so yea.....
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