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It was a dark night, and the shiny moon glittered. Everything seemed so peaceful in this little town. Everyone was fast asleep, all except Kayla. Kayla was only 17 years old, but old enough to have her own house. She rented one in the little town North of the stream, not too long ago. Everyday at midnight, a painful shriek could be heard near Kayla's house. It is heard that the Midnight Ghost is very upset and is now, haunting that house. So now I pass on the story of the Midnight Ghost.
Kayla had just moved into the house. Everything seemed fine at first, but at midnight, everything was a mess. When she tried to sleep through the scary and creepy groans, she tossed and turned. Every morning, she would have dark rings under her eyes.
Kayla couldn't stand it any longer. She had taught her friends to stand up to her attacker, and now she was going to stand up to her attacker. She hid in her large wardrobe at 11:59. She had a large broomstick in one hand, and a camera. She positioned into defense mode as the clock struck midnight. Kayla tried her best to not be scared, but she couldn't help it. She was scared. As she heard the cries of the Midnight Ghost, she jumped out of the closet and started to wave the broomstick around frantically. As she turned around to find the Midnight Ghost standing ghostly, she screamed as the ghost held up a chainsaw. The Midnight Ghost grabbed her by the neck, and killed her. So now you know, the deadly story of Kayla and the Midnight Ghost.
- by tracieXcandie |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/01/2008 |
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- Title: The Midnight Ghost
- Artist: tracieXcandie
- Description: This is the story of how a girl got haunted by the Midnight Ghost.
- Date: 11/01/2008
- Tags: midnight ghost
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Comments (7 Comments)
- PsychG - 12/29/2008
- It's okay. Remember to organize it better next time. I understand it's just for entertainment. It's pretty good.
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- Paien - 11/09/2008
- Hmmmn there was alot of build up but i think i'd like it better if it had more relavence. Good job though.
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- tracieXcandie - 11/01/2008
- lol...there was no point of this story...just a little chilly story for entertainment ^_~
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- mmm174 - 11/01/2008
- ok but kugome0102 is right-what's the point
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- Mischiefwolf - 11/01/2008
- nice! plz check out my newest story Red....Too much Red!! thnx! love ur work!
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- tracieXcandie - 11/01/2008
- it was just for entertainment..i luv writing mysteries..^^
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- Fayne Darkness - 11/01/2008
- nice but i dont get the point of it.
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