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"Hello" Frankie shouted into the dim lit park. A handsome young man walked over to her.
"Frankie?" He said softly. Frankie turned around sharply to see if he was 'the admirer'. He couldn't be. This guy was stunning. He had striking blue eyes, short white blonde hair and an Emo fringe. Frankie let her gaze float down to his mouth. They looked soft and gentle. There was a piercing on the left side of his bottom lip.
"D-did you send me this letter?" Frankie gasped, retrieving the crumpled sheet of paper from her jean pocket. She shivered, perhaps a tank top and jeans weren't the most sensible choices.
"Yes, I-I'm Nate." The man smiled gently. He noted Frankie's shaking body and her clothes. He took his jacket off and draped it over her narrow shoulders.
"Thanks. I'm devastated about my sisters. I never really talked to them much. Why did your letter say that you were ugly?" Frankie blushed at her own stupid question.
"Hmm... well, I am ugly. That's kind of an understatment." Nate frowned, his eyes shining.
"You really think so? Are you blind? Have you never seen a mirror?" Frankie took his arm.
"I never wanted to. It disgusted me to see myself." Nate looked into the distance. Frankie gazed into his eyes. Tears were cascading down his cheeks.
"You're.... you're.... not ugly. You're.... would you be freaked out if I said you were beautifully handsome?" Frankie breathed. Nate sniffed and wiped his eyes.
"No, I'm flattered that somebody as beautiful as you would tell such a sweet lie." He smiled sadly.
"It isn't a lie. You are perfectly handsome... kiss me." Frankie suddenly leaned forward.
"What? No, no.... do you really want me to?" Nate asked.
"Yes." Frankie said weakly. Nate smiled and leaned close to her. He put his lips against hers. His soft gentle yet cold lips felt good against hers. Nate slipped his arms around her waist. They pulled apart.
"Wow. That was amazing." Nate gasped.
"I know." Frankie stroked Nate's forearm.
"Why did you do that though?" Nate kissed Frankie's cheek gently.
"Because... I know you...."
- by Kashloggi Jones |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/08/2009 |
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- Title: The admirer
- Artist: Kashloggi Jones
- Description: A follow on from 'The letter'
- Date: 03/08/2009
- Tags: admirer
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Catarina Una - 05/09/2009
- ^^ Lovely plot. Me shall stalketh you from now on. Please write more!
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- XxKitty_of_DeathxX - 03/22/2009
- ohhh i want u to write more it sounds good
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