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tab Haley giggled next to me. “He is so cute.” She fluttered her eyelashes exaggerating. Her short blonde hair whip lashed as she made a very dramatic hair flip. “I might just date him.” She shrugged.
tab “He’s dead!” I told her in a mildly sarcastic tone. Haley giggled again. Our teacher stomped her foot and glared at us. We both rolled our eyes. Atleast we were talking about the stupid exhibit. It was the least anyone could do since I had to wake up an hour earlier to get at school. We were ushered closer by the kids in the back. I peeked at several kids texting. Maybe they were texting about the museum. Yeah right.
tab I turned my attention back to the guide.
“This is a digitally made picture of what Historians would assume Pharoah Ahkmenrah. He was 16 when he assumed the throne and 19 when he died.” The Guide told us in a monotone voice. I gasped. Was he like murdered or something? Haley gasped and put her hand at her throat. I tried not to laugh. I didn’t want to come home with a detention slip.
tab The dead guy was kind of cute. He definitely wasn’t ugly I mean. Though the picture was just so… fake looking. He looked like some early CGI character. It would have been better just to draw a picture of him that way you could see his tan skin and deep black hair.
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- Title: Ahkmenrah preveiw
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I am wondering if I should write more????? Please comment yes or no. Also suggesting to make anything better would be nice. Please be nice this is my first Submit!!
This is based on the Night of the Museum but more Detailed of Ahkmenrah. This is before he ever met Larry. Also I made him younger. I wrote this in fith grade but now I am rewriting it to add the new stuff I learned in English. Full chapter here: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101425349#title - Date: 06/04/2009
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- Prasha - 06/12/2009
- moooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please?
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- MangoXVader - 06/05/2009
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I think this is a very good begining.
This really is something I would like to see more of! - Report As Spam
- DecafKitten - 06/04/2009
- I like it. Sounds like it could get really interesting. Write more please?
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