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This is just an idea I had for my creative writing class
I may turn this into a story, maybe



I open my eyes to the endless landscape of air and ocean. Below me is a depthless ocean of the clearest water. I can see the ridges that populate the lowermost reaches of the ocean floor. Above me hangs a grand spiral of white clouds that encircle my position. My heart tells me that here is where I should be, the only problem with that is, I have no clue where here is. Does my heart wish to be here, in the middle of nowhere?

My scattered thoughts are interrupted by the soft sound of air. I look a few feet in front of me, the water at that spot is swirling around. As the moments pass the movement of the water becomes more violent. I find it harder to stand as the small waves shake the water I stand on.

Without warning a rapid gale hits the area, knocking me off my feet fast. My back doesn’t touch the water, as a thin layer of wind keeps me up. I feel the wind constantly moving in a circle on my back. I push myself up with my right hand, and like the air on my back, a gust of wind keeps my hand from touching the water.

Somehow I cannot register the actuality that is the wind. This dream is weird, but I am able to realize that it is a dream. But things are wrong in this one, I can feel the wind perfectly. I’ve had this dream before, but the gale has never come until now.

I raise my head to look in front of me. I find out that I am not longer alone. A slime figure in a black cloak stands before me, in each hand a elongated white lance. I cannot see his face, for the hood is up and closed. My heart is telling me I know him. My heart tells me many things, things I find to be deceiving.






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gazemea
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commentCommented on: Fri Feb 08, 2008 @ 02:50am
This ones great too! Don't really know what youre going for, but i'll wait! WHY DO YOU GET SO MANY GOOD IDEAS?! I'M SO JEALOUS OF YOU! evil emo talk2hand


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