- About noon on a saturday in summer i was over at my cousins house when everything felt very uncomfortable. As my cousin walked outside i suddenly got a chill from the area behind me. At the time i was six so i didnt really understand the phrase " curiosity killed the cat". But soon i was going to. As i turned i saw a door a white door at the end of the hall that was never there before be there. I slowly walked down the hall with a shiver through my back every step i took. As i slowly opened the door my fear rose. I looked out of one window on one side with a mirror on the other wall. As i walked in the room i started to stare out the window. As i looked i noticed a person that i am still not sure of what sex in a black coat and cowboy hat over there face. As i stared there was a sudden CRASH!!!!. behind me i turned and the mirror was broken but still on the wall. As i ran out of the room i didnt scream i just ran. As i got my cousin to show him the door was gone. As i asked if anyone was out there they all answered. No.
- by uzumaki913 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/15/2008 |
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- Title: the room
- Artist: uzumaki913
- Description: this happened to me wheen i was six at my cousins house and i never understood what it was
- Date: 08/15/2008
- Tags: fearshiverghostfrightenscaryscarecreepy
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Comments (4 Comments)
- UmbreonGal - 08/16/2008
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Too many "As I"s close to the end.
Could have been a ghost, paranormal experience. X3 - Report As Spam
- Prahbloo - 08/16/2008
- Its was cool
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- Heart Collision - 08/16/2008
- it is short, but intense and interesting. I enjoyed it.
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