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Unspeakable -poem-
I've been blinded by hate, driven by lust,
Grown to become a fallen one.
Singing away my heart in the sands of time, to come up with dust.
The high tides washing what's left of my tears.
Sweet rhymes heard before,
Yet so deaf in the ears.
I am half of what I dream.
A single moment gone,
my blood dripping through the stream.
For all that I love,
I do this for you.
My sweet and darling dove,
Your wings worn,
And my eyes burn, feeling the tears build.
My heart is torn,
For your smile has faded,
And my dreams are only made of glass.
These are things that I have raided,
Your heart, my thoughts, your body...my love






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Jehceeca
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commentCommented on: Tue Apr 10, 2007 @ 03:41pm
Sad....so sad. Tragicly saddening to me.
crying


commentCommented on: Wed Apr 11, 2007 @ 01:26am
woah... that's deep



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Crimson-Valkyrie
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 11, 2007 @ 08:25pm
I think you're feeling a bit depressed hun...
I like the rhyming...feels a bit forced though...It would have been better if it wasn't a rhyming poem...my suggestions...don't take my advice XD
Still lovely.


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