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Coming to an end, whispering my hearts thoughts
Why must all good things come to an end? Foolish was I to bring another in my heart.
A friend so wise, dearest to me, love hath made me blind, and my own world crumbles.

I don't like this reality, I hate this dead life I live. Love is to frail and friendships all come to an end.

Hold me close once again, let me feel your skin brush against mine, your love radiating off you. To be cared for once again, all that I care for...all that I want.

Breaking out of habit, wanting more, giving up pleasure, for you, you will never truly understand the ghost I am. A phantom in your memory, one you cared for, tales of new but dreams of the past.

Let me love you, help me to live again, bring your sorrow, let me mend that broken heart. Dry those tears, no more shall be shed in my presence.

All good things shall return...let me back in your heart, friendships return to good old days, no longer will we be still life in photographs of old.






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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 27, 2007 @ 08:56pm
AWW... such a beautiful poem you wrote... I have to say that there was plenty of lines that I can say are my favorite in this but my absolute favorite is the line "Hold me close once again, let me feel your skin brush against mine, your love radiating off you." I just wanted to comment so you know what I thought.


commentCommented on: Fri Apr 27, 2007 @ 09:25pm
To Snow and everyone else:

I don't write poems persay...I write Prose...that's what you have just read.
Thanks Snow XD



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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 29, 2007 @ 03:33am
Alright I concede your point XD it's prose that you write not poems but it's still beautiful and has plenty of that feeling most people don't even give a damn about.


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 29, 2007 @ 03:40am
One day Snow, one day they will care when they're alone and have nothing but this prose to read...heh...feelings they just might develop...



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commentCommented on: Tue May 01, 2007 @ 01:39am
Maybe they just might do that... Who's to tell what those weirdos and future whack-jobs/psychopaths would do even 2 seconds from now? Well when they do start t ocare I think that's the revolution to change how some people view/ live in this world.


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